Of Earth and Of Heaven

Dance with me along the horizon

Lose yourself on the sunset's edge

Stand gazing with me on the clouds

Searching for glimpses of Heaven

Reviews

[Odrah]

This is very sweet. I'm a fan of horizon imagery and you've used it very well. This poem is brimming full, and might I even suggest overflowing, with joy. There is wonder to be found in everything and here it is very simply and strongly stated.

This plucked at some of the string of my heart and certainly made me smile.

Well done.

[Wondering Mind]

This a short but lovely, dreamy write. Well penned.

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Short and pretty. You express a lot with only 4 lines which is clearly an indication of talent emerging. Beautiful penmanship. Keep on writing.

[The Dark Passenger]

gorgeous! very concise but it says everything it needs to :)
very few people have this skill of saying so much in so few words- most cloud their ideas in far too many words...
i love this! thanks for sharing :D

[Elizabeth Thief]

its very good. very beautiful. you have great skills my friend.

[An Open Venue]

this is strong and concise with few wasted words and clear imagery.

I have walked here as have many

well done
Ven

[$teph@nie <3]

ahhhhh its pretty :D
i love your stuff its soo good :]

[~angelalala~]

short and beautiful. i love this poem. so simple, but so powerful. well done.

[Brandon]

Nicely done. Short and sweet.

[bluessadmood]

nice words ,lots of images ,and full of love,dance with me,lose yourself ,stand gazing,lovely words ,why i was so taken with i always go with long lines like a story telling but you put few words ,but you tel a lot ,amazing really loved it all

[Adela Muresan]

Beautiful imagery.
I like it that you refer to someone else except you in it � creates some sort of happiness.

A.M.