The Point?

The Point?

A Poem by Pain Love & Skulls

Huddled in the corner of an alleyway

I sit there on the ground,

The cold, barren ground

It matches my soul.

 

It is pitch black

The only light comes from the still, subtle moon

 

I see few people walk by,

I hear the somewhat faint, distant voices,

I sit and wait if I can hear someone calling my name

Wondering where I am.

 

But I hear nothing,

Nothing at all it is dead, complete silence

I hope, wish, pray

That I would hear someone calling my name.

 

Hoping someone would be looking for me

Anyone that cares,

Or even cared about me

Wondering where I could be.

 

But yet just as I expected,

 I hear nothing

No voices, no sounds

Nothing, as if the whole world has disappeared

Left me here to fend for myself

 

I knew that no one cared

If someone did I would hear their voice

Calling my name

Out in the streets looking,

Worrying

 

Still hoping

But nothing

So what’s the point of hoping

Exactly there isn’t a point

So I stop…

 

 

© 2010 Pain Love & Skulls


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It has a lot of meaning behind it. I think a lot of people have been to the point where we question hope of everything. Ive been there questiong if hope is ever enough. But hun dont give up hope its out there!

Posted 14 Years Ago


a powerful piece! The emotions flow from beginning to end. There will always be someone to care for you. If there isn't don't stop you will find that person. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very good poem. I really like this :) Great, great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very powerful. Great job with the emotions. Your words scream them

Posted 14 Years Ago


it's good. It's still really sad, and it shows tons of emotions. Good job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is really good..filled with lots of emotions
Great Job

Posted 14 Years Ago


I think of some homeless runaway. Very sad, but good at showing emotion through words.

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow this is filled with such emotion, all this loss and sadness! it was amazing,

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very good.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is very interesting and it vibrates with emotion:)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Pain Love & Skulls
Pain Love & Skulls

Rocky Mount, United States Minor Outlying Islands



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My name is Jess Di Paula i love writing and everything to do with it. I started poetry when i was in 6th grade. I am now a freshman and years old. I love music, its my everything. I play piano:). I re.. more..

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