Three BIG words

Sorrys, i cheated

 

Please don’t be mad

The last thing I want is for you to be sad

it was just one time

not that big of a crime

just a  little peck

and a little mark on my neck

I know its been 2 years

Trust me, I cryed my tears

I can’t hold this back

I feel like a bomb, ready to attack

I know youre going to be heated…

But baby…

Sorry, I cheated

Reviews

[justink :):)]

it was good and i read it like 12 times

the way you made the words rhyme i realy liked it

justintime
aka justin

[Unspoken]

i liked how you made everything rhyme in your poem. I also liked how you bolded most words for emphasis. That's cool.

[RADHICA]

wow i love that even tho u probably rushed wen u wrote it lol but jess that was really good i love your three lil wrdzz very interestin choice of wrdzz lol it was very SUPERB I LOVE IT... YOU DAM CHEATER...LOLXX

[Fra/c/ture]

jess,

this is pretty good. im not that crazy about mad and sad as your first rhyme because the others are stronger and they make the first one look not as good. did you choose those two words because you had to get a rhyme down? if so, you could try it with the exact words you want instead of mad and sad and see how it looks unrhymed. maybe it would be okay. i just think this is decent and i dont think the first rhyme does it justice.

[steph noumeh]

andd miness goooddd? omgg jesss your peoms like perfect it makes perfect sense and it's different i think i read it like six times hahaha

[the_real_me]

thats good most people will get this one