The Beauty of My LoveA Poem by Jezebel
How could you even begin to think, even entertain the idea that I don't love you?
If I allowed myself to stoop so low, I might say that I love you too much, so much, that it's like crashing to the bottom of a Well, drowning in a lake of sewage. Loving you is like burning, wrapping my hand around a piece of that stupid black cast-iron, and becoming seared to it, unable to let go even though it hurts so much. But that's the beauty of it, my love for you is so twisted. It's like an infection, inflamed and so painful and just a little unhealthy maybe. I can't describe it in sparkling words, my love doesn't glitter, it rages.
But now maybe you'll say something ridiculous, maybe Hell, woman, that doesn't sound like love.
Well, I'd say that shows how much you know. © 2012 Jezebel |
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1 Review Added on March 7, 2012 Last Updated on March 7, 2012 AuthorJezebelSomewhere, MOAboutHmm, well I'm attending college in Missouri, I'm a member of the Navy Reserves, SeaBees. I'm a Creative Writing major and am taking a poetry course, and would like more critiques on my work. Live to.. more..Writing
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