Cosmic Bliss

A taste of touch

Bathing in the bittersweet sunshine of love
Always craving warmth yet burning in its heat
Goodbye to love after its long embrace
To let go, to let it be free

Touch lingers, whispers in glimpses onto hot cheeks, day dreams, night dreams. Horny thoughts.


To rest my hands upon yours, to feel your face, your chest - I crumble. Helplessly in state of Mesmerized bliss
To feel... Warmth, tenderness, lust, excitement, cosmic bliss
A teardrop of intimacy
Sighs of past pains
The bitterbliss of a tantric tryst

Some days I care for no more than your smile or your warrior hugs which soothe fears you see but do not understand.

I could spend hours reading the pages of your eyes
Traveling the roads of your body mapped in every direction toward bliss.

Enough
Imma crazy fool
Let's make love

Reviews

[Amanda Lee/ Isolated Dr..]

Love the line "always craving warmth but burning in its heat"
Great meter in the first stanza!!! :)
"A teardrop of intimacy" nice!
"bitterbliss" that is a fantastic word i wish i thought of it
"your warrior hugs" :)
Haha great ending too

This piece is so strong overall; no criticism needed : Great Write!!!! :)

[Everett DeValle]

Sublime...Excellent Poetry. :)

[LeeLee Ryder]

CF has a warm, luscious, intimate flow that takes the
reader on a journey of utter bliss.. I especially love the lines:
"I could spend ... eyes" & "Traveling the roads ...toward bliss"..
The playful ending is wonderful too ... Good job, Jessi L..
LLR

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Wonderful word crafting and a beautiful look at reflections exotic in this poem.
"Bathing in the bittersweet sunshine of love" :-)

[Jordan Avechuco]

Beautiful, i enjoyed reading this, thankyou for sharing

[Kyle]

I love this. This is incredibly delicious!

[Sagar Waingankar]

Lovely illustrated piece of art! I liked the way you expressed it! I haven't found it absurd at any stage! No need of warning for under 18 :P

[Luke Ritta]

amazing ending to the poem....I really enjoyed reading this...very, very good.

[Eagle Cruagh]

Holy Toledo,
Everyday things just get hotter
at your house and this is a scorcher.
Great stuff.
Thanks,
-----John

[Seshat Nidaba]

"I could spend hours reading the pages of your eyes"

Precious Jess! What a living write.