Love Transfusion

Only love within...

The Love

 never dies

it just

      traNSFORms 

                    transfuses

                            .....TRANSCENDS

flowing       endlessly       effortlessly     from     one donor     to another

How silly we are to try control the flow.. Depriving- denying   ourselves-eachother  of such joy, such light, such...love

Breathe in beauty

Breathe out resentment

Author's Note

Thank you for your reviews <3

Reviews

[Amanda Lee/ Isolated Dr..]

This is put together beautifully
There is such a strong feeling of serenity throughout

[Eagle Cruagh]

Good for you

[Jessi Leigh]

Thank you all sooo much. So stoked that this has such meaning for all of you! Namaste

[Ruth]

This is stunning! Beautiful structure and breathtaking imagery..the flow absolutely immersed me! xx

[Judas Hammer]

extreme positivity, I really like this, it was cleansing and I actually can adopt this, very nice..I enjoyed, powerful.

[EMF]

Thank you. That's it really, but I know you would wish more. Firstly it is a truly beutiful poem awash with the love it describes. It describes both the ideal and actuality perfectly. Secondly, the format. Wonderful. Simply wonderful to see someone taking a chance wwith structure rather than just hit the centre button. And it works perfectly, elongating the poem and the experience of reading it. Thirdly. Thank you again. You have made my day

[knightcall]

The structure of this suggests steps but then it stretches out. That to me means the steps of achievement causing us to stretch. If I am wrong feel free to poetically slap me.

[Robin]

how silly indeed , I am smiling at this transcendental poetic ~

[Lily Mae]

Your amazing ..I love the message and the style:) xx