Naked and Open

I

lay

gorgeously

spreadeagled

a        the        T

     c       (OPEN)        a     

  r           ready              b 

 o        to receive          l     

  s       all you have to     e        

                                        s              offer                         EXCEPT FOR YOUR S**T    

t              f         

o               e         

u                    e         

c                         e          

h                        l           

m                    m            

e                  e            

taste me                 feed me                 

 

sqUEEze me    stroke me   torture me until I SCREAM out of ecstasy

"I AM YOUR SEX SLAVE AND I BEG YOU

TO STOP"

Or...... Feel free to just walk by.

grab a piece of sushi

                          and walk off.

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

Reaction:

Gasp, breathe deeply , read more,
hunger, drool, wonder, SUSHI ?
Wander off, wondering at the magic
of women, well, one woman.
------ Eagle Cruagh

[Viper]

mind blowing.....

The creativity of this shoots off the charts....

WOW! that's all I cam say

[Raya Avans]

Wow. Very nice poem and I have to say I very much loved the format you created with it, well done!

~ rae

This is my sis!!!! How do I love her! :D

[Jessi Leigh]

Thanks Spoken Word. Was most enjoyable to write :)
...What did you choose? ;)

[SpokenWord]

LOL this was creative and cute. I like the person structure and how it read. A touch of erotica and a choice to accept or get a piece of sushi, lol too funny!

[Jessi Leigh]

Thank you both of you!

[Moflo]

Definitely a great format, very unique! You set this piece up very well, nicely done.

[Robin]

concrete sensuality , I like your imagination

[Jessi Leigh]

Thank you so much for your review. I'll have another go at it :D See just how explosive I can make it :p