I feel you love me in parts

I'm hoping when I leave that

your bed smells like my perfume

otherwise you'll probably forget

I was even there

until the next time you need 

a soft place to land.

I feel you love me in parts-

hands easy to hold

hair to run your fingers through

hipbones to tickle

and lips to kiss-

but the package as a whole

proves too much to handle and

you cant touch all the

memories

or make love to all the 

insecurities

and you cant fall asleep on a chest

you know is heavy with 

scars from boys just like you

who love when it is easy

and let me leave to try to find

reasons to stay.

"I feel you love me in parts" -11-7-13- jessicagadziala

Reviews

[Relic]

I love reading your poems, you are so intelligent. You explain things in a unique way that is poetical and effective. Guys are more visual while girls are more internal. That barrier is something men need to break through if they want to understand the ones they are with. It's more than just sex. Great writing Jessica.

[Antonio Valentino]

"you cant touch all the

memories

or make love to all the

insecurities"

what a great line..

funny thing is is that its the memories and insecurities that make it real and something we can relate to, if we have the courage to share ours as well..

very nicely penned, thanks for sharing it with us

:)

[Kelechi Awoms]

Nice piece
Emotional and direct

[V. P. Trujillo]

This is alike the relationship of Kurt Cobain & Courtney Love. You should see her song, "Doll Parts". Her band is named"Hole".

[shaun lucas]

I like the way that you explain yourself!