I Want Impossible Things

I want impossible things-

to be kissed like the war is over,

pulled backward and overcome with 

passion on a busy street-

to feel the wonder of the first time I

felt hands on my skin, shivers and butterflies-

or the overwhelming comfort 

of being loved for the first time and

the innocence to believe it could last-

a heart maybe not so broken

... or someone who will love it

regardless.

"I want impossible things"- 10-31-13- jessicagadziala

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

Wonderfully written, Jessica...Wooow, just wow. A lovely write from the soul.

[Neon]

A coolio poem i read. Nice work i'd say... Everybody wants possible things to do but am glad you read your stuff that you love doing impossible things.. lol even glad to know, you love to want impossible thing doing ... lol. A piece is all about your feelings you've. Heart never takes you away to the beauty... and the love always keeps you alive in someone's heart beautifully. I loved the concept. This's a good poem you wrote from your heart. Nice job.

[Natalia]

Very awesome poem! It felt very relatable and imaginative. Keep it up!

[Praween Gupta]

..wow..so smooth.
its too good to b true.

[Sarah Lynn]

Great poem! I think every girl feels this way! lol

[zainul]

Things you wanted are really impossible for some moments but very common for other moments.
Time determines the opportunity.
Let's hope for the best,dear poet.:)