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 i grip the bottle
she tells me no
i move away
i stay
she is gone
i shouldve listened
now i regret
goodbye bottle
give me one chance
i love u
bring me back

Reviews

[Justin]

very well put together and very powerful!!!!!!!

[KAREN]

Powerful and deep! Sometimes life brings choices your way, and life makes these choices hard, and once and awhile if we're lucy easy.

[Forest Green]

Choices...every one of them can come back around in good ways or bad. Saying no can become a pattern with time. But next time it's a brand new test.

Potent words...

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime we make the wrong decisions. Hard to be forgiven and accepted back. You create a poem with wisdom in so few words. A lot of good titles in the poem. I like "Goodbye bottle." Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote