Angels and Demons

Angels and Demons

A constant battle going on in my head.
Internal conflict where plenty gets said.
Fighting to dominate, good against bad.
Feeling happy against feeling sad.
A battle field where I sit on my own.
Surrounded by Angels and Demons who roam.
Seeking to conquer the war of who's right.
The Angels sing out, the Demons they bite;
There I sit somewhere in between.
Irresponsible victim it would seem.

Reviews

[Thea Fuentebella]

"The Angels sing out, the Demons they bite." --minor suggestion; put and comma after demons. it'll seem more dramatic, is all :)

it's short but very meaningful. i personally can't squeeze in that much emotion in such few lines as this. wow. you're good!
people have an angels and demons war everyday in their heads, and you explained it vividly and thoroughly...in such few lines! beautiful.

thank you
Thea

[LadyNaida]

This is a constant battle that a lot of us fight. But low and behold that inside of us is a greater one to those that trust in the Lord. To battle those demons you have to gird yourself up with the full armor: Helmet of salvation, breastplate of righteousness, belt of truth, shield of faith and the shoes of the gospel of peace.

[Angela]

Very true. We sit somewhere between, but never forget we ARE responsible and only victims if we let ourselves be.

[Madison A. Wright]

very well written poem. I enjoyed the flow of it.... my favorite line: 'The Angels sing out, the Demons they bite;'

The battle between good and evil.. as you sit in between somewhere.

[M.Babu]

"Fighting to dominate, good against bad.
Feeling happy against feeling sad."
This line really stuck out to me:)

You've well captured that moment when we're overcome with the 'two' forces and feel weighed down and indecisive. I like how you've worded this piece...very subtly done. Thumbs up!

[Murtuza]

Yes, those two critters keep messing up my head too. Nicely written

[?]

Now this is awesome, a battle for control.
This is so true for so many of us.
Powerful, meaningful piece

[HopelesslyDevoted]

very interesting topic

[Alvin L. Kathembe]

great work! The Great Controversy rages all around us, and the battle is fought and won in our hearts, and in our minds...great work again! wish i'd see more poems on this topic here on WC

[Short.Nerd]

Very good!