So Close, So Far

thoughts during school

Everything has gone so far,

And yet so dreadfully close

Endless wandering as a lost soul

Questioning every single move

Confused over a certain aspect

Of life as I know it

Will it crash and rise again,

Or will it just crash once more?

Will it take a long time

Before I finally rise again?

Or will I get back up right away

Just like I ought to every time?

Author's Note

ignore fragments in the beginning

Reviews

[April Child]

Nicely captured. This is life, the peaks and the troughs. It will definately crash and rise once more and then do it again and again and again....

interesting piece, i can feel the struggle and conflict
-nice write-
-ST