Dear my love

Just a short one

 

Dear my love,

Dont you want to be near me?

 

Dear my love,

Cant you see?

 

You are the only one for me.

For you I have this ever growing need.

 

Dear my love,

Do you feel the same?

 

Or are you just playing games?

 

Dear my love,

Will you take my hand,

be mine,

let me call you my man?

 

Dear my love,

Tell me soon,

For untill you do,

my life will be filled with gloom.

Reviews

[jen -- JG]

Hard to bear a love like this, when you seem to care more than the other.

Your poem tells this clearly, a young love - filled with yearning needs and a heart filled with doubt.

Well set out, easy to read with a clear message.

Well done.

Jen