Vampire in me

Darkend hours fall upon me,

I will never be set free,

 

My days are long,

I can never die,

Bloode is the only thing I need,

It is the only thing I seek,

without out it I become weak,

 

My soul is cold,

I will never become old,

My teeth are sharp,

I use them to suck the life from your heart,

 

The one who made me,

failed to see,

I was not ready,

now its to late,

and i have to live my forever damned fate,

 

I begged him to wait,

but by then I was already made,

This life will never end.

 

I cant call it life,

but i cant call it death,

I am somewhere in between,

during the day i cannot be seen,

but at night,

my eyes gleam,

 

I want to be set free,

but this darkness has become a part of me,

so again I look to feed,

I enjoy it when you bleed,

It fills my ever lasting need,

and turns my lust into greed,

 

Forever more I will live in the dark,

for my lifestyle is now considered an art,

I cannot give it up,

I cannot leave,

for this is the vampire in me.

Reviews

[Dani California]

Ahhh... this is brilliant!! I am a huge Anne Rice fan and although I live in light (or try to stay as close to it as possible...lol), I am very intrigued by the darkside... ! :)

Your flow, rhyme and rhythm are perfect! Wow, I think this may be one of your best pieces yet!

Exceptional work Jessi! :)

[M. Amphet Salt]

You're writting is getting so much better. I really love this piece as I find something of me within it. Good Job!

[Mr. Lopez]

Lock your doors and close your windows 'cuase jessi's on the prowl. Her hunger lusts for lives a must and her bite is very foul. Wonderful way to start the night (Fri 13th) Creepy !Thankx

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh how I love vampires and other creatures of the night... and this is a perfect look into the black hearts that rule the shadows of night... very erie and intense... my favorite piece from you!!

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A dark piece which flows wonderfully. Well written, my friend. Thank you for sharing