For Lexi

For Lexi

A Poem by Jessi Raine is falling
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Love

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Struggling for a love, that every one wants to keep from me
Its like i'm drowning in a river full of depression
They keep adding brick to rope on my ankle
But when I talk to him, he gives me his air bubble

© 2010 Jessi Raine is falling


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aww cute :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


are they adding brick to his ankle too.how long can you share the same air bubble.If the air runs out will you die together.does moving on together keep love alive.I like that this poem stirred questions inside me.that is the beauty of art .you don't have to tell the whole story just enough to make the mind busy

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like this poem. The gift of a air bubble to keep the love alive. A amazing poem. A complete story in so few words. I like the ending.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Jessi Raine is falling
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