Two Different Worlds
A Poem by
Jessi Raine is falling
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Some people shop some cut Some have a family Some have torn lives Some Live life to the fullest Some end them quickly Some Cry Some Die Some hide Some try And Some cant go through the pain...What will You Do?
© 2010 Jessi Raine is falling
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This reminds me of Emily Dickinson's poem "I can Wade Grief"
Very nice:)
Posted 14 Years Ago
In the LIne "Some Live like to the fullest" did you mean "some live life?"That part confused me a bit, but other than that, I liked it. the last line was awsome. Almost took my breath away.
Posted 14 Years Ago
In the LIne "Some Live like to the fullest" did you mean "some live life?"That part confused me a bit, but other than that, I liked it. the last line was awsome. Almost took my breath away.
This is full of feeling here.
Alot of pain is expressed.
Very well written.
Posted 14 Years Ago
This is full of feeling here.
Alot of pain is expressed.
Very well written.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on April 29, 2010
Last Updated on April 30, 2010
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