To much

Three words said to often
Three words used to much
If I heard them now it wouldn't be enough
Three words that have no meaning
Three words that should be the beginning
If you want to say them now i'll have to feel your touch
Because just saying I love you won't be enough.

Author's Note

Be honest!

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

You used the wrong version of "to" (too) in your title and then again in the 1st and 2nd lines.

[Notsoloud]

Good but...and this is a constant thing with me. In love poetry never say the word "love". Leave it hanging in the air like perfume. Describe it. Allude to it (which you have done). Be subtle about it, but never say it. The reason being is that your reader knows it's a love poem by the merits of your lines. If you say it it cheapens the rest of the poem. Now that being said...it's just my opinion on love poems. Your writing is full of emotion and sadness but still full of focus on the matter. Keep writing. Cheers.