...cracked...

...cracked...

A Poem by JayDee

Betrayed...

by everything and everyone

Drowning...

In the deepest waters I could ever imagine

Trapped...

Within all that surrounds me

Damaged...

From the deepest part of my existence

Exposed...

The sorrows from beyond

 Exploited...

The she I thought I knew  



© 2017 JayDee


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Deception......lies, cheating and the cracked aftermath. Relatable to many. Your title sums up the feelings and the words here very well.

Nicely thought and written.

Posted 6 Years Ago


JayDee

6 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and commenting, your words are appreciated
This is really good, so full of emotions. I also see it as kinda relatable.

Posted 6 Years Ago


JayDee

6 Years Ago

Thank you choosen, i appreciate your thoughts towards it

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JayDee
JayDee

Johannesburg, South Africa



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