A Fight

Distort 

     Hated

        Angered 

              Insane 

A lost cause with nothing to gain

                   Tracked

           Influenced

      Measured

Degraded 

A once known life that gradually faded

Alone

    Lost

        Burdened 

              Befriended

 A lost cause that needs to be ended... 

                    Mislead

               Mocked

          Abused

Torn apart

Its all on you to brave a new start

Reviews

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A creatively designated piece.

An interesting poem....about how one needs to overcome the destruction of their life; to put up a fight and be courageous and choose a life that is good and worthwhile.

A nice piece of work.

[JayDee]

Thank you Doodley.

Yes most definitely. One cannot give up no matter the past one has had. Its tough... but it can always change.

Appreciate it

[christina sherin]

very nice poem.very innovative and creative.

[JayDee]

Thank you so much

[Satoshi IroTzu]

Respect, JayDee

The form (writing structure) of your poem reminds me of hooligans ready to have a brawl with police or other hooligans.

You beautifully worded the cause behind violence. Every human being deserves to live as a human being.
Everyone can relate to this poem. Makes you look like a street poet, updating rest of the society what is going on and why it is going on.

Creative.

[JayDee]

Thank you ever so much Satoshi. Much appreciated,

Yeah the world is a rough place....