Face it

You feel times are hard

because you think you wont make it,

You keep yourself bared

when you know you have to face it.

You put yourself down

and you think yourself low,

In your tears you drown

because its the only way you know.

You try and hide it

when you wipe your tears away,

You want to submit

but far from it you still stay.

You want to believe

there is more you can do,

something better to achieve,

A brand new you.

You wont put yourself down

and you can't think yourself low

For those tears in which you once did drown,

is where you will now grow.

Reviews

[RNK]

Very honest and hopeful. I feel like it gets a little wordy in some places but overall a really touching piece

[JayDee]

Yea I figured a bit or repetition yeah? But thank you very much for your review, much appreciated

[PHFASCES]

A very touching motivational piece. I love how it is centered around those going through depression and shines a light on how temporary their problems are. Thank you for sharing.