love sucks

love sucks

A Poem by jessb0407

when your some one like me love sucks 
you have the pretty friends and your the ugly troll 
trying to find the nearest brig to hid under 

do you ever fell like your surround by Swans and
your the ugly duckling sitting hoping some
fairy god mother will come and give u a 

pretty dress that you could where to the ball and 
meet your prince and do ever hope that one day you'll 
wake up to find your someone els just for a day to  fell pretty 

instead of a ugly duckling,troll or and maid that has blond hair  

© 2011 jessb0407


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I'm sorry to point this out, but shouldn't it be bridge and hide? there are spelling mistakes that I really can't get past.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Freaking sweet, Jesse. I love how you think you're the ugly duck when you're the pretty one. Hn! Nice work, though!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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west wareham, MA



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