Wow that was awesome I mean it! That was a keeper to be locked away in many hearts from all over the world that poem speaks loud and clear! An advice poem that is very real! You did great:) Jessa my friend!
I LOVE this lol. It feels not just romantic love is the complete focus. Using love to slow down and embrace many types of relationships, and eventually some of those relationships may turn into something that last forever. I enjoyed reading this very much.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
You've got it! Love comes softly, and it takes a truly patient person to grasp love in it's fullest .. read moreYou've got it! Love comes softly, and it takes a truly patient person to grasp love in it's fullest measure.
I'm so glad you like it! Thank you for your review! (:
This is beautiful. I believe there is enduring everlasting love out there.. but even that love will have flaws and questions and be open to interpretation... Sometimes its a realm outside that everlasting love that makes that love endure... just a thought.. When I began to read this brought 1 Corinthians 13:4-7 to mind
" Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It does not dishonor others, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres. Love never fails..."
In the journey of love there are many twists and turns.. some lead nowhere..
This was an excellent read.. thank you.. shallimarRose
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Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Yes! I love people who are reminded of Scripture when they read my poetry...You just made my day! An.. read moreYes! I love people who are reminded of Scripture when they read my poetry...You just made my day! And I also really needed that verse, so thanks for sharing! You're awesome! (:
"I believe that life is chaotic, a jumble of accidents, ambitions, misconceptions, bold intentions, lazy happenstances, and unintended consequences, yet I also believe that there are connections that .. more..