Runaway

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I want to run away

I want to cross seas

I want to find a way

To feel pure ease

 

I want to run a way

I want to be free

I want to just say

Everything I see

 

I want to run away

Embrace the universe

I don’t want to pay

For a grave and a hearse

 

I want to run away

This is my life to live

My journey must begin

And right now it shall start

Reviews

[Westminster Abbey]

This is exactly how I feel. I feel like I'm stuck in the same city I've been in all of my life, when there's so much more to see, so much more to do, so much more to be!

100/100
~Abbey
:)

[That1Nerd23]

Yeah, it's hard not to start feeling trapped,but there is hope...You are where you were always meant to be, perhaps it's not a permanent stay, but it's a permanent impact. (: Keep striving to push forward and you'll be amazed at how many giants you will defeat along the way.

Thanks for the review and rate!

[4$H]

The topics you choose are too good... And your writing style is exceptional.

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you.(:

[B-poet]

Very well written, I love the purple and turquoise lettering that sheds light on the overall meaning and theme for your uniquely creative poem. Great write. :)

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you!!

[Fallen Angel]

I ike it. Makesme want to get out there and see the world. :) lolz Good write!

[That1Nerd23]

Thanks! ((:

[The Analog Kid]

I like the repetition. Works well. This sort of reminded me of The Hobbit with the journey theme.

[That1Nerd23]

Thanks!

I LOVE The Hobbit!

[The Analog Kid]

I guess it was the last stanza:) Me too. YW.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

nice runaway poem :D well penned

[That1Nerd23]

Thanks! (: