Passion

Come closer to me, Dear

Place your hands upon my waist

Cast away all your fear

Glide your lips across my face

Until your lips meet their twin

Let your soul release its passion

Show me the tender love within

Let’s forget our current fashion 

Fear not the gentle grace of love

Fear not the consequence of desire

Fear not the purity of a dove

Fear not the flame, nor bare attire

For what is love but passion

What is passion without fire

What is fire without the flame

Of unending love and desire

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

There is nothing more beautiful than passion, in my opinion. Not many can survive without it.

[That1Nerd23]

I agree 100%.

[The 13th Eros]

Yes, there is no fear in love. Its purest fire burns away fear and pain, and leaves only the sweetest intoxication. Drink it deep and may your love always overflow.

[That1Nerd23]

:) Thank you.

[B-poet]

Love without passion or desire is a candlelight that's been blown out from the wind. Great job illustrating this correlation of sorts. :)

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you, glad you like it. (:

[Abhishekizy]

Wow... that was kinda cool.... the borderline of sensuality and the incredible ( read utopian) feeling called love. I was just pondering over some of my serious heavyweight poems and felt like reading you....... And girl, lemme tell ya, its a dessert, an icing!!!
Great job!!

[That1Nerd23]

Haha, Thanks! (:

[Jeremia]

I do like it. But, I am confused with what you mean "fear not the consequence of desire"?

[That1Nerd23]

It may be interpreted however you'd like.

1) morally
2)personally
3)in regards to pregnancy
etc., etc....You choose.

[That1Nerd23]

And thank you!

[Jeremia]

Yes, but if that desire causes one to sin, shouldn't it be feared?

[That1Nerd23]

Yes, very much so.

[Jeremia]

Then how can we fear not the consequence of desire?

[Bitter Overdose]

Love the poem, beautiful language.

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you so much, Miss Christine! (:

[Adam Whitworth]

like it, well done

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you, Mr. Whitworth. (: