Captured

Love is so indescribable, It’s enchanting and undefinable.

There are times where I’m captivated, As if I’ve been raptured.

 Captured and raptured, In the spring of Love.

The spring of pure defiance;The spring from above.

Reviews

[ChaoticSoul]

Beautiful use of the image with the poem. Also great word choices; they really hit the mark with the overall eloquence here!

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it! (:

[Geist Von PA]

As above, So below :-)

[That1Nerd23]

Indeed. (:

[i'mjustalonelywriter]

Short, to the point, and beautiful. :)

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you! (:

[Westminster Abbey]

Short and sweet. Perfect.
100/100

[That1Nerd23]

Thanks, girl! (:

[Damien Davison]

I thought it was beautiful, great job!

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you so much! (:

[Adam Whitworth]

not my cup of tea but well done

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you. (:

[Jeremia]

Short but potent. I like it. Especially the first and last line. I dont know what else to say really, other than it certainly is undefinable, often times unexplainable, but still powerful.

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you, and very true.