Rain

My eyes are like the sky

My tears are like rain

They fall upon the earth

Yet my sorrow still remains

Reviews

[Fallen Angel]

I... Love this! :) I reaaally love short and simple poems. This is so short but it's so descriptive and powerful and meaningful! :) Great write!
(The quote is one of my favorite too. ;D)

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you! (:

[Fallen Angel]

Welcome! :3

[Lucien Maier]

Very good, great visual piece. nice work

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you! (:

[Michael G.]

A very good poem. One I believe anyone could relate. Well done.

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you!

[Chuck]

Very touching. Very simple, poignant, deep. It opens my heart to read it.

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you so much. (:

[Talal Hussain]

great composition, very nice flow :-)

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you so much! ((:

[Eric James]

This is such a powerful write! and so short! The picture choice was spot on for this and again this is really good and emotions spill out on this!!

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it! (: