Your Eyes Are the Stars

 

The night is cold and dreary

My heart is crippling inside

My thoughts are like a tornado

Exceeding the hurt and lies

Yet still I see the stars

And still I see the moon

No matter what it takes

I know I'll make it through

Because your eyes are the stars

Your heart, it is the moon

And your love is like a candle

That makes my journey new

Reviews

[Westminster Abbey]

How can I put into words how beautiful and moving this was? I always seem speechless with your work. Keep writing! 100/100

:)

[That1Nerd23]

Thanks, dear! ((:

[Arte Por Vida]

So beautiful. The beginning has such a dark, dreary feeling. The second stanza shows some hope.. And the third stanza is just exploding with love. I absolutely love it.

[That1Nerd23]

Thanks! ((: You're so kind!

[An owl on the moon]

So lifting... We all pass through shadows.. all pass through night... and yet, even in that night blindness you find hope and light to guide you... May we all see the world with such eyes.

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you, thank you very much!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

beautiful

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you. ((:

[Eric James]

i like this jessa! it flows well when read out loud. the emotions in this really project well!

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you so much! I know it's not perfect, I was very emotional when I wrote this, so yeah, I'm really glad the emotions were projected well! Thanks again! ((:

[Eric James]

Your welcome !

[Adam Whitworth]

its ok

[That1Nerd23]

Uh, thanks.

[That1Nerd23]

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