Should I...

Is this right or is this wrong

Am I weak or am I strong

Is this real or is this fake

These feelings I can’t shake

 

Is this poetry or just a song

Should I sing or go along

Rhyming words to create flow

How do I know, where shall I go

 

Should I take Your hand  or flee

Should I let you walk with me

Should I accept your sweet embrace

Or simply hide my shameful face

 

Should I trust you and your will

Should I run or just be still

Should I cherish your every word

Or follow the rumors that I’ve heard 

Reviews

[Balkaran Sidhu]

perfect...couldn't find any flaws....first 2 paras set the tone up

[That1Nerd23]

Thankw! I'm thrilled to hear that!(:

[Zainab UF]

The questions we all ask at some point in our lives, perfectly captured in poetry. Captivating is all I can say!

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you so much! (:

[Jeremia]

At the very beginning I could help but be entranced. That stanza relates to some of the stuff that I am feeling. And the third stanza, my word. I can just relate so much to a lot of this. Nice flow and nice read.

[That1Nerd23]

You know, reading it now I can see how you would be able to relate so well. It's basically your life. Hm. God's plan? I think yes. (:

Thanks for reading and encouraging me! ((:

[Westminster Abbey]

Wow. Perfection has been acheived. All the back and forth - I love it! Conflicting emotions, confusions, all the questions running through your mind, I get them all the time! Keep writing! 100/100

:)

[That1Nerd23]

Thanks! I appreciate it! ((:

[Eric James]

Another brilliant poem from you! All the questions on what to do that we all ask ourselves from day to day is what makes our journies . This had a good rhyme and very well written ! Thank you for Sharkng your work. It's very enjoyable to read

[That1Nerd23]

Why thank you! I appreciate it! I'm so glad you were able to find it relatable. I try to write that which can easily be applied to everyone's life. I'm so grateful for your review; thanks again! ((:

[Allycat]

Wonderful poem!
excellent flow, personally one of my favorite ones that you've done
thank you for sharing :)
added it to my favorites :D

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you so much. That means so much and I needed that encouragement more than you know. I appreciate your review!

[Allycat]

no problem :)

[Arte Por Vida]

This is so awesome! I seriously love it.

[That1Nerd23]

Thanks! I'm so glad you like it!

[An owl on the moon]

Such a profound, powerful vision flows through your words, set to perfect rhythm and rhyme... Questions strike and sting us daily, and how we must seek wisdom to choose what is good... what is best... where the blessings flow. Awesome write!

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you so much, Kind Sir!
I am flattered by your encouragement.
And most certainly, life is a lesson full of questions-a test really...Our answers can be written in either pen or pencil, they can be regretted and non-erasable, or gentle marked and kindly placed where we desire. I am thankful for all things new and old, because in ether case there is a beautiful lesson waiting to be unfolded and learned.

*Life can only be live by inspiration.
So, we must seek to inspire and inquire. (:

[An owl on the moon]

You are as poetic is your comments as you are in your poetry! Thank YOU for sharing your words and life with us here... Enjoy the journey... :)

[That1Nerd23]

*Laughter* Yeah? Hm, well, marvelous! Thank you for that! And you're very welcome! Enjoy yours as-well. ((: