Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star

Like you've never read it before. (:

 

Twinkle, twinkle, little Star

How I wish you weren’t so far

Comforting light you send to me

Your little spark is all I see

 

The calmness of your lovely glow

Makes my heart wish to go

To a meadow so peaceful and calm

Where I can rest and read a Psalm

 

There’s nothing like a peaceful night

Gazing at the stars so bright

Where wishful thinking may fill the air

Leaving you with the slightest care

 

No more worries or hurtful regrets

No more having to complain or fret

It’s all about the moment

And all that the last lent

 

It’s all about what’s inside

And all that you chose to hide

It’s about that release from despair 

It’s about recovery and sudden repair

 

So no more drowning in pity

Yes, it’s okay to be witty

Have some fun but do what’s right

Demolish the old and receive new sight

Author's Note

Let me know what you think! (: Thanks for reading!

Reviews

[4$H]

Makes you look at the sky just to find a comforting hand pat you on the shoulder and envelope you it's protective lap... Incredible :)

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you, I appreciate it!(:

[Jeremia]

Gah, hits me well. I love the imagery, because that is something I really love.

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you, friend! (:

[Arte Por Vida]

Awesome :) I really like this one.

[That1Nerd23]

Thanks, girl!

[Westminster Abbey]

I love this!

100/100

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you!! ((:

[Allycat]

Beautiful write :)
I love looking at the stars, they are always so beautiful
great write!
thank you for sharing :)

[That1Nerd23]

Yes, me too! (:
And thank you! (((:

[That1Nerd23]

Beautiful, vivid, your own style and set up, I truly enjoyed reading this,
Thank you sweet Jessa

E.L.

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you so much. (:

Always a pleasure :) you're welcome

[An owl on the moon]

Your words are like a psalm... music that lifts the heart and soul to a place of joy and freedom. How we all need to hear your song and dance free of the painful past!

[That1Nerd23]

You think so? That's very encouraging! I can say the same about you! ((:

[Harry Alston]

Beautiful post-modern piece of writing here, what a lovely idea! I like how you managed to retain the classic nature of the song/poem/whateveritis but add a nice twist. Really good :)

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you so much. Truthfully, when I wrote this, I didn't even have the song in mind. Haha. But yes, I love classic literature and songs/poems! They ignite in me a childish excitement. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this! Thank you so much kind sir!

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

Such a cool idea to re-write a classic we all know. I loved it! Creative and worded well, great overall. :)

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it! ((: