I'm Done And Moving On

Where shall I go, what hope have I in this place

I’m lost and afraid

Where shall I place my foot, yes, where shall I step

I’m lost and afraid

What shall I feel inside, and when shall I see your face

I'm hurting and confused

And when will I behold a sign from you, the slightest trace

I’m hurting and confused

You see, I’ve waited here so long, waiting to be saved

I’m running out of strength

I’ve sat upon this bench in the cold and dark night waiting

I’m running out of strength

Yet, still, you have not come to me, still, you call me “Slave”

I’m weary and drained

So why, oh why, should I continue to sit and patiently wait

I’m weary and drained

It seems to me you’ll one day come and say, “Oh, sorry I’m late”

I’m lonely and abandoned

But that’s not good enough, don’t you see you’re just a scam

I’m lonely and abandoned

Don’t come around and bring me flowers and apology try to cram

I’m done and moving on

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

This feels like a waiter interrupting a personal confabulation between folk on a personal nature. And that is not only the charm but underline emotion in the work. Is this good and bad or inner thoughts and doubts? Nice work.

[That1Nerd23]

Inner thoughts and doubts. And thank you so much!

[Arte Por Vida]

I really like the italics in between each line. I think it really adds to the work as a whole. This is beautiful. Emotion definitely shows though it.

[That1Nerd23]

Yeah? (: Thank you, lady!

[An owl on the moon]

You mingle such strength and courage into this painful sadness... Filled with stunning emotion, your heart is seeing the reality... trying to let go of what once was... and truly wanting to move forward... May there only be light and love on the road ahead...

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you. (:

[GypsyAlien3303]

The emotion you infused into this is great. I dig it! :)

[That1Nerd23]

Thanks you so much! (:

[Zainab UF]

Oh wow. I love the how the anguish transforms into steely resolve. Nice work, Jessa!

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you, Zainab!! (:

[B-poet]

Too many broken promises can truly lead to a broken heart. No one likes to be pulled by their emotional strings like a puppet. When it's truly time to let go, it's time to move on. Great job and very well written. :)

[That1Nerd23]

Yes, you are very right!! Thanks so much!! (:

[Steven Cash]

Wonderful as always Jessa

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you, brother! Glad you like it! :D

[Steven Cash]

NP Sis

[Allycat]

I really love this, I feel like lots of people an relate to this, including me
Thanks for sharing! :)

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you so much! I believe so. (: My pleasure. Thanks for reading and reviewing! (: