Embrace the Lovely YOU

 

You look in the mirror, but now tell me  what you see

When you look in the mirror are you who you want to be

I urge you, dear friend, to embrace the lovely you

No more masking what’s inside, don’t ask them what to do

 

You’ve lived your life with a false identity

You’ve let yourself go and now you’re pretending to be me

But friend, you must turn back, you must try

I know it will be hard but surely God will hear your sigh

 

If you take my hand I’ll walk with you today

Step out in faith and be courageous, yet forget not to pray

I know the Lord our God will lift your weary soul

And no matter what you face He’ll help you reach your goal

Reviews

[Balkaran Sidhu]

good poem...love,god..u captured them well in this piece

[That1Nerd23]

Thanks!

[Jeremia]

I disagree with the last verse. Our goals are flawed, his are better. So he may not help you reach your goal. At least he hasn't with me yet. idk. Other than that, it was good.

[That1Nerd23]

:/ You may disagree. All is well. I appreciate your thoughts.

[Jeremia]

The goals of our soul perhaps, because they will line up with what he wants being that He inhabits our soul. So you think He will help you reach your goals no matter what?

[Eric James]

I really like your style of writing alot! I read one and cant wait to see what the next one has to offer. hopefully the list keeps growing so i dont run out. again awesome write! keep them coming:)

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you so much! I'm so honored that you like my writings!
The list shall never end, I assure you. (:

[That1Nerd23]

If our hearts are filled with Him, then our goals will come from Him. Unless we are living in futility and sin than otherwise we should worry much less about mistakable goals.

[Arte Por Vida]

Your poetry is just so beautiful. I love this. Never stop writing such great poetry.

[That1Nerd23]

Thanks! I'll try not too! :))

Yous is grand, too! (((:

[GypsyAlien3303]

This is a great piece. I really enjoyed it. :)

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you! I'm so glad to hear that!

[Zainab UF]

Inspiring, really uplifting. Really enjoyed reading this!

[That1Nerd23]

I'm so glad to hear it! And thank you! (:

[B-poet]

Very inspiring and spiritually profound. I great message to anyone who needs to lift their spirits to greater heights. Well done. :)

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you, your reviews are always very encouraging. (:

[Westminster Abbey]

That almost made me cry :'-)

[That1Nerd23]

Awe, I'm glad it touched you, Miss. (: Thank you so much for reading.

[Allycat]

Very nice piece jessa, I really enjoyed reading it
thanks for sharing!

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you, so glad you like it! ((:
My pleasure.