Pity

Hope was fading ever so fast

You could see the dismay in her eyes

She feared her future, resented her past

And her heart began to wallow in lies

Therefore, new lots she then did cast

What empathy can cover such pity

What love can soften and end her cries

What home in this miserable city

Can silence her endless sighs

And among this large committee

Who will gracefully help her rise

When she received so little pity

She began to pass out  goodbyes

Reviews

[KaylasPoetryBook]

What a beautiful piece, I could feel the sadness in your words. So glad that you shared this (:

[That1Nerd23]

I'm so glad you like it! (: Thanks for the review!

[Arte Por Vida]

This is so sad.. But beautiful nonetheless. It has true, deep, somewhat dark emotion. Great job.

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you, Miss!

[Steven Cash]

Really good job

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you! ((:

[J. Viands]

Dark real dark not like you good job wit something new keep it up

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you...I appreciate that.

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

I really like this. I especially love how you ended it! And I like the line "What love can soften and end her cries". Great piece.

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you so much. I am flattered that you like it. ((:

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

When you continually feel sorry for yourself the world is going to become more and more immune to the drama. Nicely worded poem.

[That1Nerd23]

Yes, I agree entirely.
Thank you. (: