Sea of People

Sea of People

A Poem by That1Nerd23

Among me stands a sea of people

Frozen in their tracks

Hidden thoughts beneath the steeple

Praying wisdom not to lack

 

A brand new state of mind

A brand new misconception

That the people around them lie

And there is no true redemption

 

But then there come the reality

That love was hung that day

Upon a tree in Calvary

“Tis finished!” he then did say

© 2012 That1Nerd23


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Nice indeed!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


That1Nerd23

12 Years Ago

Why thank you!
This is awesome work....nice flow and a great topic to write about....good job

Posted 12 Years Ago


That1Nerd23

12 Years Ago

Thank you!

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