Mountains

Beautiful mountains surround me

In the midst of a foreign land

My burdens have drifted away

You released them from Your hand

 

And now I know that I am not alone

I have found something brand new

I have found an eternal Savior

Whose love ever seems to brew

Reviews

[Cynthia Man]

It's short, but I like it really much... It's a really sweet poem :D:D Love the way you illustrate the scene and the comforting feel I have after reading it :))
Nice written!

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you so much kind lady. You are sweet. (:

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

Short but very sweet and now a favourite :)

[That1Nerd23]

Yes, thank you.

[Cerise]

Awww...very beautifully you have put the words...few lines with but described in a great manner..:)

[That1Nerd23]

Why thank you very much. You are kind.

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

Beautiful. And a very nice theme. Flows well too. Great job!

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you so much! ((:

[Steven Cash]

aw, is this Romania?

[That1Nerd23]

Yes ((:

[Steven Cash]

Great great!!!

[B-poet]

I love the landscape photo and the colored diction. It illustrates that there are other places on earth where your soul is truly free from propaganda and conformity.
Great work Jessa. The country side is a very peaceful place to rethink what's truly important in life.

[That1Nerd23]

Yes, it really is. Thank you so much. ((:

[Dr. Wood ?]

fine words to God
I feel it might flow better though with a few tweaks

The 1st verse runs ok but the 2nd gets a bit tied up...
I know now that I'm not alone
and that I've found something brand new
I've found an eternal saviour
whose love everlasting will brew

sorry if this is being too presumptuous Only saying what I see

[That1Nerd23]

Hm. Interesting. Yes, you are certainly right.
I will give it a edit. Thanks for your opinion.
And no worries, I am very open to criticism. ((: