Mountains

Beautiful mountains surround me

In the midst of a foreign land

My burdens have drifted away

You released them from Your hand

 

And now I know that I am not alone

I have found something brand new

I have found an eternal Savior

Whose love ever seems to brew

Reviews

[Eric James]

This is another great write! sometimes getting away is the best thing to do. i like to escape into the mountains with my guitar and just play all day,all stresses and burdens go away for that time being

[That1Nerd23]

Yeah, I love any scenic location. Rather than taking guitar, for me, my camera assists me. We have a grand time together! (: ha.

[Arte Por Vida]

I like this. It's short and sweet. I think that it could easily go farther as well, though. As in, it could end with this, or more could be added.

[That1Nerd23]

Thanks. Yeah, I believe it could too. I stopped when my inspiration ran out though, lol. (:

[Anna]

I love how short it is, but it shows deep freedom.
It also makes me think of what you've said about Romania haha

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you! And yes, I wrote it with Romania in mind. ;))

[Anna]

sounded as such (:

[That1Nerd23]

((:

[Zainab UF]

Wow. So beautiful - the poem and the pic. :)

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you. :))

[Westminster Abbey]

Yay! I like it! I like it alot!

[That1Nerd23]

Yay! Thank you!

[BladeofStars]

Very good! :)

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you, sweet sister! (:

[Ari Cash]

So pretty!

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you!

[Wakeofahero]

Another good one. Well done!

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you so much!

[Allycat]

aww I really love this! I was actually just up in the white mountains yesterday! :D Well done :)

[That1Nerd23]

Awe, thank you so much. They are most beautiful.

[Soul Fire]

Beautiful

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you, Lovely. ((:

[Soul Fire]

You're welcome ,it's raya ;3changed my name again hhehe