Fairytales and Lies...

Fairytales and Lies...

A Poem by That1Nerd23

The fairytales we hear as kids

Have proclaimed so many lies

We think that in order to be in love

We have to compromise

 

We have to uncover ourselves

We have to let people in

But true love is so much more

Than dipping your heart in sin

 

They tell us that we will just know

That is will be love at first sight

But true love isn’t about that

It’s about giving up your life

 

Husbands are to reflect Christ

Do you know what he did?

He died on the rugged cross

To remove all your sin

 

The church is called His bride

It’s His love and his pride

And that is how husbands are

To love and treat their wives

 

And wives are to serve them

Like the church serves the Lord

We are to help and obey

But not view love as a chore

 

Marriage is meant to be forever

Divorce in not a choice

So if you’re struggling in your marriage

Pray that God will help you endure

© 2012 That1Nerd23


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Thanks you for standing firm in your beliefs. This is very well done:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


That1Nerd23

12 Years Ago

Life is too short not to stand up for what you believe. You only have one life to make a difference... read more
The Analog Kid

12 Years Ago

YW..anytime Jessa.
'But true love is so much more
Than dipping your heart in sin'

Your topic is so relevant, well written. Inspirational. Thank you for sharing~ pat

Posted 12 Years Ago


That1Nerd23

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Pat! I am so glad you like it! You are very welcome, thank you for reading it. (:
I just absolutely love this so much. Everything about it is amazing. Incredible poem! It means so much, and you can feel the message you are trying to give off. A good message at that. Wonderful job :) you have very brisk talent (a very good thing) and I believe you should never stop reading. This was very pleasurable!

~Missy

Posted 12 Years Ago


SmileBig :)

12 Years Ago

*writing
That1Nerd23

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much friend!! I appreciate it!! ((:
SmileBig :)

12 Years Ago

No problem. Any time :)
oh now then this is lovely to the core i am a catholic and this is just so wonderful i have enjoyed and gleefuly digested every word that you have written amazeing stuff well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That1Nerd23

12 Years Ago

I am flattered. So glad you like it! Thanks for your review! (:
Ian H Morrison

12 Years Ago

no thank you for the poem it really is pretty amazeing

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Added on August 8, 2012
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