Lightning Bugs

*

L

i

g

h

t

n

i

n

g

*

B

u

g

s

*

Flicker, flicker, in the dark;

Whatever could it be?

Little lights around me flash,

Like little enchanting dreams.

 

My, oh my, how precious they are;

These little creatures I see!

They light up then they quickly dash.

They have plans and they have schemes.

 

But one thing they surely are,

They’re lightning bugs and friends to me.

They surpass the value of all cash.

They gather and become a team. 

Reviews

[Westminster Abbey]

The picture painted here is fascinating. 100/100

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you! I really appreciate that! (:

[Balkaran Sidhu]

coool

[That1Nerd23]

((:

[Damien Davison]

Nice little poem. It was cute, I never use that word but for some reason I feel inclined to use it here lol. Anyways, thanks for sharing!

[That1Nerd23]

Haha (: How kind, thank you. :)

[Adam Whitworth]

well done

[That1Nerd23]

Thanks.

[The Watcher]

Beautiful and immersed in nature, just like you Jessa. =)

[That1Nerd23]

Awe, thank you, John. ((:

[The Watcher]

You're always welcome. =)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Anything in nature is worth more than all the money in the world... your poem brings back wonderful childhood memories... I love lightening bugs.

[That1Nerd23]

Indeed. I'm glad to stir memories. Thanks for the comment! I love lightening bugs, too! (:

[shultzfeather]

cool little trip

[That1Nerd23]

Haha, thank you. I'm glad you liked it. (:

[Globy]

great piece. Short and fast! But full of pictures!
Feels very nice to have Lighting bugs as friends. :)

Globy
----------------------------------
CopyrightsWorld.com | We help creators protect their creations!
Any questions on Copyrights ? Feel free to ask!

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you. Yes, for sure. We can learn a lot from lightning bugs. (:

[Aislinn]

Whimsical. Childlike. I love it. I can't find a thing that I would change about it and I love how it isn't deep. A lot of the pieces on this sight deal with issues that are slightly more substantial than fireflies. This is different. Refreshing.

[That1Nerd23]

I am so happy that you liked it! I love your name. I actually almost named a character in a story I am writing Aislinn. It's Irish, meaning dream or vision. I think it's beautiful! Again, thank you so much!

[Aislinn]

Thank you for the compliment. And as for liking it, you did all the hard work. It's beautiful.

[That1Nerd23]

You're very kind. (: And you're very welcome.