Rising From The Blue

Believe in yourself and aim for the stars :)

Rising From The Blue

She sits all alone

By her window sill

Her future is unknown

Like clouds over the hill

 

Wonders what’s in store for her

Will all her dreams come true

But everything seemed a blur

As anxieties increasingly grew

 

But then she recalls

The best of advice

She won’t ever fall

For she won’t be born twice

 

Create your own life

And work hard for it

You won’t get it twice

Make your choices worth it

 

And enjoy it to its fullest too

As it’s an essential aspect

Don’t waste your time in blue

Otherwise you’ll regret

 

Life is a precious gift

Fate is your decision

So let your hopes uplift

Cause you’re worth appreciation

Author's Note

After a long time, I am pleased to present this poem. Its about hope, about finding light in the dark parts of your life.

I would like to thank two people specifically for helping me out with their sincere opinions ; Barleygirl and echoes of eros- thank you people

Happy Reading!

Reviews

[B. Boileau]

An inspiring piece, strong and positive in attitude. The blue blur is something we all try to avoid. Seems as though you doing a great job of it

[Jess]

Thank you for your time. :)

[hcarson]

Love this..especially at the moment where i'm feeling a little stressed it has reminded me to just chill..things will fix themselves. Wonderful words and advice :)

[Jess]

Exactly. I try to remind myself about that too.
Thank you

[3X3MPLER]

positive, to the point and artistic. We need to be reminded that all we need is a positive mind. Thank you for doing that

[Jess]

Thank you :) :)

[John Gifford]

Very heartfelt and delicate, I enjoyed it and gave it a prominent spot on my wall! Well done!

[Jess]

Thank you for your kind words

[Riddhi]

Very nice poem...One gets life only once so one should enjoy it to the fullest...Great work...I liked your use of language and intelligent use of words...Keep it up and thanks for sharing...
Take care
Riddhi

[Jess]

Thank you for your time :)

[Emily]

'For she won’t be born twice'

I really like this line!
Keep it up!!

[Jess]

Thanks Emily :)

[Inject Positivity]

Well! This something truly inspiring sister... The first couple of stanzas speaking of a girl(we all can relate to it) who is having trouble to foresee any future of her, she wonders what will happen as everything seems 'blur'... Then in the next stanza something hits her mind and she remembers a precious advice which I believe can help anyone who is feeling down at that moment in life... Life is truly a precious gift, if we sit down and don't enjoy it fully and don't work harder it will leave us in the backyard, so we should chase our dreams and never be afraid of anything because whatever happens life is worth living...

As the poems structure, I really loved it, it has nice flow and a perfect rhyme scheme. The most important part of it is its message.... Well done sister, worth the wait for a new poem...

[Jess]

Thank you so so much for the appreciation! And yes you've interpreted it accurately. Absolutely well said.
Thank you :) :)

[Inject Positivity]

You are always welcome my cute little sister...