Rising From The Blue

Believe in yourself and aim for the stars :)

Rising From The Blue

She sits all alone

By her window sill

Her future is unknown

Like clouds over the hill

 

Wonders what’s in store for her

Will all her dreams come true

But everything seemed a blur

As anxieties increasingly grew

 

But then she recalls

The best of advice

She won’t ever fall

For she won’t be born twice

 

Create your own life

And work hard for it

You won’t get it twice

Make your choices worth it

 

And enjoy it to its fullest too

As it’s an essential aspect

Don’t waste your time in blue

Otherwise you’ll regret

 

Life is a precious gift

Fate is your decision

So let your hopes uplift

Cause you’re worth appreciation

Author's Note

After a long time, I am pleased to present this poem. Its about hope, about finding light in the dark parts of your life.

I would like to thank two people specifically for helping me out with their sincere opinions ; Barleygirl and echoes of eros- thank you people

Happy Reading!

Reviews

[Eddie Davis]

I liked your philosophy expressed in your poem. Too many poems are dark and gloomy, it is good to read one which is encouraging.

[Jess]

Thank you Eddie :)

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

This a very encouraging poem. The tone captured it. Your last stanza captured me a alot. Well written.

[Jess]

Thank you so much.

[Wolf_Lord]

Her future is unknown Like clouds over the hill Love that part. This is well written and very inspirational. Thank you for sharing. Wolf_Lord but my frns call me Wolf ,'', ^@@^ ,'', and I hope you will be one.

[Jess]

Thanks. Haha sure.

[Salem]

AMAZING POEM ! KEEP IT UP :D

[Jess]

Thanks a bunch

[Caleb]

It may just be the fact that I am tired and all, but I don't understand the very last line. Let''s go ahead and assume that this is the case. Now, other than that one line, I love it. It gives all the feelz of hope and taking your life and shaping it the way you want it. It's not on the same level as Shia LeBeouf, but I don't think anyone can match his enthusiasm.

[Caleb]

P.S. Ok so after I posted the review I realized that you're was the contraction and not the possessive form so yea... sorry about that I get the line now.

[Elmarie]

Hi Jess Lovely Lovely words. Uplifting and profoundly true. Thank you for sharing this with me.

My favorite verse would have to be:
But then she recalls
The best of advice
She won’t ever fall
For she won’t be born twice

Blessings El

[Jess]

Thank you El for ur time

[Sunita Jugran]

Beautifully penned, Jess, your poem flows like a little stream in a valley , raring to be a mighty river.A very good one. You shine, girl

[Jess]

Thank you so much for your valuable words. so glad you enjoyed :))

[Ayvid N]

Indeed, the gift of life is precious. One is lucky to be alive and so let's make the best of it. The poem has great rhyming and a very motivational content. Appreciated a lot.

[Jess]

Thank you so much girl.

[Ayvid N]

You are most welcome.

[Woody]

that's the spirit! never say die! a great inspirational poem that should be read when life is at its darkest. there's always a silver lining against all odds.
good one Jess.

[Jess]

Thanks a bunch.