The So Called 'Friend'

watch out! there are people who pretend to hug you but instead stab you.

I was never into all you do

But once I stepped in I couldn’t go

 

Yours smiles, your words and fake etiquette

Cast a spell on me which I refused to hate

 

I made you my friend without realization

That there was no match for our mental synchronization

 

Gradually I felt there was something surely wrong

You had been using me for your purpose for so long

 

You never really cared about any of my deeds

Unless I was there to cater your needs

 

But I can’t bear this now I’m way too sore

Though you’ve made me a fool you won’t anymore

Author's Note

Sometimes there are people who just fake around and pretend to be your friend. But they forget that you exist when you need help.
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Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

This is so filled with the pain caused by those who are too shallow to really love, to be a true friend that stays close no matter what. And though you write of the sorrow, you write of the strength as well, to move on with your life and not be pulled back anymore. Powerful.

[Jess]

Yesss...Thank you :)

[Leo]

I felt I was diving into an ocean until I hit the last stanza I rose right back up..that shows the great creativity you possess..original and electrifyinh..well done

[Mifa]

This is okay. Keep writing, you can only get better.

[Brittanie Bardwell]

Well spoken and very true. You really captured the way many people feel when it comes to those that use them. Great work!

[Jess]

Thank you so much !!

[PoeticSorcery]

I've met a lot of people like that. it pisses me off that they can get away with it.

[Adam Adams]

'nutter one of my fav. poetry, indeed, no doubt!

i guess, it happens to everyone.

"everyone has friends,
every friend has something else
cheat's not an option but choice
that everybody takes to get dwell..
somewhere in the state of their own mind.
life's beautiful,
but sometimes, some friends ain't make (live/treat) it right,
resulting, NO MATCH FOR THEIR MENTAL SYNCHRONIZATION, visualized."

that's all what i sorta resonating from the cemetery of your funeral words. very nice imagery you cast in words every time you hold a pen in hand & put down blank papers on table to get 'em all filled drilled and dang willed with the conspiracy of your deeded words. great job, sugar.

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This poem is so popular because it so relevant to all of us. Look up non-zero sumness for psychology. It explains every you said in research terms and you did a marvelous putting it in terms the world can feel and understand. N.

[Jess]

Wow!! Thank you so much

[Daniel-Andre]

This is great! I consider this words of wisdom, no one should ever take advantage of anyone! And for those who are victims, get out of it as fast as possible. Yup, an enjoyable read with another strong message that`s worth heeding. Great work!

[Jess]

Well, thank you Mr. Daniel

[Daniel-Andre]

You`re welcome, milady

[Joshua Haines]

This poem. Really got to me. Because I have a cousin in my family who is like this poem. Hope you keep writing you have the makings of greatness in you XD

[Brennon]

I hate people that are like that. They just fake it. Then they make you think YOU did something wrong. I like this poem. Probably one of my favorites. Good job.