Keep in mind.

I like this :) i know that sounds self centered but i really do :) Hope you do too

 

I wish I could tell you

I had a reason to feel like this.

That maybe I lost someone close to me.

 

 

If you want to get specific, I did

in a way.

I lost myself.

Who wouldn't be upset about

that?

 

 

I guess losing myself was

the least of my problems.

I don't think I ever really felt pain

until then.

I lost my life to a guy,

yeah,

but I still lost myself that was

my fault.

Not his.

 

 

I'd love to blame him

and make him pay,

but I just cant.

 

 

Today,

I'm still very sensitive.

If you touch me

I can freak out on you,

or if you make sudden movements.

 

 

So if you ever meet me,

just keep this all in mind;

I'm fucked up for a reason,

just something to keep in mind.

Author's Note

kinda sounds like a song to me... without rhyme...
Ignore spelling&grammer!

Reviews

[Calypso]

I like this. When we lose sight of who were are we become nothing, barely human. We all owe the world to know who we are.

[Emily is not found, she..]

speechless my dear.

[TheRavenQueer]

"Today,
I'm still very sensitive.
If you touch me
I can freak out on you,
or if you make sudden movements."

Sounds familiar... As my mother always says, "Boys... they're wonderful a******s." Haha! But very well written, I liked it a lot. :)

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

this is amazing!
I'm still very sensitive.
If you touch me
I can freak out on you,
or if you make sudden movements.

I can relate to this stanza so much :/ x