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Round and round,

The hands move slowly bound,

to show the truth behind my frown,

oh how I'm surely found.

 

These cheeks stay stained with tears,

them showing my true fears,

but what sound isn't found by my ears,

is shown in the years.

 

These words are only shallow,

hang I must by the gallow,

the gull of the birds above me shadow,

the oncoming death of which is so callow.

 

I smile away the days,

slowly turning to a haze,

as I slowly phase,

I see so many ways...

 

 

Boom

 

Author's Note

If you dont understand what "callow" means, you should probably look it upp (i had to... LOL)

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i love it jess its so rhymey haha