Ever Glance

Random poem, I forget the reason why I wrote it now..

If you knew what did I,

would I lie,

could I?

 

If you knew what was said,

before you went to bed,

would you lie?

would you lie?

could I?

Could I?

 

Your thoughts center around hate,

nothing can stop your evil thoughts,

your glares spreak through shaded trees,

even in the deepest wood.

 

your false everything blinds me so,

i cannot see the knife,

my back is full of them,

take a number.

 

you blame me for your losses,

and who am I to fake,

maybe it was,

maybe it was your ego.

 

your problems are so few,

dont blame me for them,

twas your fault,

that I am so screwed.

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

For being a random poem, I like it. Great Write!

[Vanessa Rico]

I do like it! Love the last line too...reminds me of all those times I took the fall for my so-called friends. Anyway, I enjoyed this!

[Chloe]

Very interesting. I like it alot!

[Short.Nerd]

I like it:) Very good.

[Alicia Hirshey]

this is a great poem. your choice of words fit perfectly.

[Butterfly Ninja :3]

i like it!! twas your fault, that i am so screwed ,e favorite line XD

[onceafaerietale]

i really like it, I liked you choice of words and the way you moved them around to make it sound a little old fashioned but you mixed it with modern which made it really interesting and gave it texture

[RidingTheWind]

I love it...'I cannot see the knife, my back is full of them' definitely my favourite part of the poem. The repetition worked well in the rest of the poem, and it feels like you're writing a story about betrayal. Great write.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

i do like it! so intense and mysterious.