Forgiven Sins

Forgiven Sins

 

I ask God for forgiveness

For all my sins

Everyone I love has left

And now I only have God to turn to

 

I confessed all that I've done

Awaiting for help

Even just a reply

 

I keep my mind open and my mouth closed shut

To see what will come

Before the day is done

 

It feels as if I have been walking for miles

In these old shoes of mine

As I walk through the park

 

But when I stop to listen

I hear a soft whisper in the breeze

 

"All is forgiven."

Reviews

[Alexis]

I loved this poem! Great job! :D

[Beth Wilcox]

This was beautiful, very beautiful!

[Jim Parson]

We are never alone when we have God in our hearts. I can feel the hope in your writing, and the redemption. Nicely done.

[morningstar]

I really liked this poem. I felt like this before too. favorite line: ' It feels like I've been walking for miles, In these old shoes of mine.' nice poem :)