Time

Time

A Poem by Jesi

Time

 

Time, Let time

Do what it does best, Let it make the future

 

Let the minutes tick away

Go day by day

But be careful what you say or do today

For it will soon become the past

 

And the past can be good or bad

Either way it'll end the same

Even if your in pain

 

The past is what makes the future

So just be sure

Of what your gonna do

On this very day

© 2011 Jesi


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I loved the pace and structure of this poem your rhyming style is very original and talking about time in a very different way other than hours but in past present and future sense is something I haven't seen before so well done this if the first piece I have viewed of yours and I will be sure to read the others well done

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I loved the pace and structure of this poem your rhyming style is very original and talking about time in a very different way other than hours but in past present and future sense is something I haven't seen before so well done this if the first piece I have viewed of yours and I will be sure to read the others well done

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Jesi
Jesi

Storm Lake, IA



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