Longing

Longing for a companion

I'm far from good looking, far from being a saint,

a million miles from perfect and a lot of insane.

 I'm a bag full of regrets and a ton full of pain,

stories of a broken heart and full of dreams that are unmade.

 I've been reaching out to the void longing for some one to come,

maybe she'll hold my hand and tell me baby your the one.

 I'll take you as you are... she'll say... ill take away your pain.

 I'll put your past in a dungeon and throw the keys away.

Fall into my arms and let me kiss your tears away.

 I get you baby- I really do!..with all your messes and all that hair.

 A stormy Night or a dull gloomy day...

We'll be together forever till the end of life's play

 

Reviews

[Pax]

a romantic poem....
full of imperfection, but aren't we all...
nobody is perfect...
but when a soul has someone to lean on and love one another...
"I know that everyone knows that a soul isn't complete without its other half."
great work!

[char]

"A million miles from perfect and a lot of insane."

That line's so freaking awesome. Cool...I'm adding this so I can read that line whenever I want. :)

Hmmm...it's not letting me. Oh well. Love that line though. I shall commit it to memory.

[Jesal Gohil]

thanks Anna.. i really appreciate that u have liked it so much.. i am genuinely humbled

[Sami Khalil]

stories of a broken heart and full of dreams that are unmade.
Welome to the club like they say and welcome to land of human reality.
Well penned.

[Jesal Gohil]

Request you feedback please!!!!