Kryptonite

Kryptonite

A Poem by Jerryyoung1z

I know some things just ain't meant to be
I've loved once I've loved twice you see
But close your eyes then count to 3 and let's try this babe
You turn me down you push me away
But I hold on I'm here to stay
Might break me down might lead me astray
But it's okay babe

My nightmares always feature you, and you're the star of my fantasies
Your sweet smile just like the morning dew, underneath it's just a fallacy
You smash words straight through my brain
But I guess I'm just a sucker for pain
Since I met you I'm no longer the same(for better or for worse who knows?)

You played my heart like a football, you kicked it left you kicked it right
O babe you're my downfall, but I still need your love tonight
You smashed my heart on brick walls, I felt your sting I felt your bite
But I still call you my all, though you're my weakness my kryptonite .

© 2017 Jerryyoung1z


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It's kinda weird the way you're describing something that seems agonizingly painful to the heart, yet the sound & pacing of your words have a bouncy & even playful attitude. It's like this guy doesn't mind being kicked around & in fact he might even be having fun with it. I guess everyone has a different threshold for painful romantic stuff! Anyhow, you are describing a common scene for some who are unlucky in love, yet you're doing it with much creativity & originality.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jerryyoung1z

7 Years Ago

Thanks a lot. It's been a while really.
barleygirl

7 Years Ago

I haven't been very consistent about writing or reviewing in the past six months! I'm trying to get .. read more

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Jerryyoung1z
Jerryyoung1z

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