My treasure chest

I've loved once, I've loved twice
I've never loved anyone quite as nice
My love like sugar, my love like spice
The love you have for me, hard as ice
Do I want you?
Do I need you?
Only one reply, hell yes I do!
Is my love real?
Does it even exist?
I just want you to know, my love is true
This might not be mutual, oh yes I know that
But mine is there, it's there to stay
I might have made a wrong choice, bet my gran's old clock on that
It might even break me down
Might even lead me astray
But I hold onto something, a mad man's hope
Glittering like gold, from a pirates telescope
Tight as a life line, never letting go
Might bruise me, might hurt me
All this I know
But I keep moving, I won't rest
Till I get to my destination, my treasure chest. . . .you

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Your poem very accurately describes one determined person in love! Wow! Even tho I really loved reading it, upon afterthought, I wonder if this guy could be borderline stalking & bothersome? Just kidding. I believe that longterm love requires at least one person to be this tenacious. Good description of hanging in there! Thanks for sharing!

[Jerryyoung1z]

Thank you very very. I wrote it with snmeone in mind. And yeah, I know I can be a bit stubborn, maybe even even bothersome lol

[barleygirl]

*smile* Writing forces us to be honest with ourselves, huh?

[Jerryyoung1z]

Yup, it does:-)

[RJ]

Awe Jerry this is adorable!!!

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A brilliant write, Jerry.

We all want to find our treasure chest, buddy.

Pick up the spade, and keep looking. Well Done!

[Jerryyoung1z]

Thanks for your lovely review.

[Archos]

This poem has a stunning sense of rhythm to it and feels very fresh and professional. I love it! Thanks for sharing!

[Jerryyoung1z]

Thanks!! Really really for the review

[Jerryyoung1z]

Thanks!! Really really for the review

[Jerryyoung1z]

Thanks!! Really really for the review

[Jerryyoung1z]

Thanks!! Really really for the review

[Jerryyoung1z]

Consequence of having a crappy internet

[Archos]

Well, that sure sucks. But don't worry, even if you have fast connection, these things are common on writer's cafe.

[Jerryyoung1z]

Yeah, guess so.

[Dead]

This is great!!!!!!!!! :)

[Jerryyoung1z]

Thanks:-). I appreciate it