Poor Wee Hare

Poor Wee Hare

Poor wee Hare at the side of the road
deid on the side wi yon dirt
ye should be lain on a bed o flooers
as ye faded so awfy hurt

A car must have hit ye  span ye roon
his lichts did blin ye gaze
ye didnae even see yon doom
cut doon frae ye free running days

Reviews

[John Patrick Robbins AK..]

Very interesting write with many intersting things i belive they call them words idk brother i do know i gotta lay off the acid amigo
good fast write poors a wild turkey drinks on me grasshoper

cheers brother Gonzo

[Richielee]

lovin the accent throughout Jeremy, more i say more

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Jeremy, you know I adore this!

[A.D. Wilson]

Love it! The accent really adds to the poem. It put me in the main character's head. Poor little bunny.

[Judy Ponceby]

Awww jeremy. So sadly sweet. I love how you wrote this with the accent. I was able to follow it. Gave the right kind of feel to such a sadly poem.