Spring's Dreaming Rush

Spring's Dreaming Rush

Spring's dreaming rush unfolds before my eyes
unlooked for light and life's hope all renewed
eager shoots that set their faces to the skies
We strive to climb that bonds may be eschewed

Walk hand-in-hand amongst the breathing green
I begin to grow anew in spring's fresh light
and if I only flourish for a while
I have had a glimpse of something true and bright

Reviews

[Judy Ponceby]

Beautiful Jeremy. In many ways my friend :)

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Gorgeous poem my friend.

[Audrey Howitt]

So very clean and fresh--the feel of it. That couples with a renewal of hope. Nice!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Wonderful!

[Groovy]

Nice write!

[FJ Davis]

Last two lines make a quite sensible life philosophy, Jeremy.
Artful heart-talk yielding an inspiring blessing--can't help but love this soul-warmer,
Grateful for the experience, JW.

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[Lily Mae]

Sounds like you got a little magic in your day.. I'm glad... what a beautiful write:) xx